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Half-draft, with attitude!

1 Leave a comment on paragraph 1 0 I’m not done with “Assessing Attitude” yet, but there’s enough there to merit some feedback, especially as I’m finding this horrendously tricky to write. If the tone isn’t just so, large sections of this will shed more heat than light.

2 Leave a comment on paragraph 2 0 So. How about y’all tell me where the tone isn’t just so, so I can fix it? I’m terrible at judging these things for myself.

3 Leave a comment on paragraph 3 0 Also, if you know where I might have sourced the arm-lifting confidence trick, I’d appreciate a pointer. I know I read this somewhere—it’s much too clever for me to have invented it!—but my backup brain on Pinboard isn’t turning it up.

Source: https://expandingskills.dsalo.info/half-draft-with-attitude/